"in the morning when I wake
and the sun
is coming through, boy
you fill my lungs with
sweetness, and you fill
Old, unrequited noth/feelings galore. I think I've come a bit of a way since the first piece I wrote about him, 11 months ago. [link]
And I'm getting redundant with the whole shy gig but if you met him you'd know that that's the word for him. (it's taking me two weeks and counting to finish The Butterfly's Daughter because I don't have much time for it what with high school and shit, which explains how the monarchs snuck in)
A shout out to David, 'cause he knows what it's like.
's blue velvet
, which was lovely.
I think I like this so rip it up and tell me whatever's wrong with it. Tell me what you think about the flow, imagery, and structure, tell me what you're getting from this, and general comments are loved. No plagiarizing.
Pick of the Day over at June 27 '13 suggested by *imaginative-lioness and featured by =LadyofGaerdon
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